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Analysis
The poem explores the theme of poverty and deprivation through the vivid portrayal of
an old woman eating plums eagerly on the street. The exceptional gratification and
pleasure the plums offer her suggests the hunger the woman must be suffering. “They
taste good to her” has been repeated four times in the poem. The exaggerated
descriptions of how the old woman relishes every bite of the plum (e.g. sucking out one
half) and the tremendous comfort the plum offers her (e.g. solace of the ripe plum
filling the air) help to highlight the plight of the old woman and arouse the reader’s
sympathy.
Example 2: Speaker, Tone and Voice
Comment on the tone and voice of the speaker in the poem.
“This Is Just To Say”
William Carlos Williams
(1883-1963)
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
Source: William Carlos Williams's
Spring and All
(1923)
Analysis
In the poem “This is Just to Say”, the speaker adopts a first-person voice and seems to
be apologising to somebody whose plums he has eaten. However, his tone is more
playful and mischievous than apologetic and regretful. The title “this is just to say”
reinforces the unapologetic tone found throughout the poem. While the speaker
admits in Stanza 2 that he knows the plums belong to “you” and are reserved for